USERDOCAP-325 updated the steps needed to download the binaries and documentation.

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/getting_enea_nfv_access.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/getting_enea_nfv_access.xml
index dbb1692..54d506c 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/getting_enea_nfv_access.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/getting_enea_nfv_access.xml
@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@
 
   <para>Enea NFV Access releases and updates are available as binaries ready
   for download from the <ulink url="https://portal.enea.com">Enea Download
-  Portal</ulink>. </para>
+  Portal</ulink>.</para>
 
   <para><emphasis role="bold">Downloading Enea NFV Access</emphasis></para>
 
   <orderedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Log in to the link above using the credentials provided to you by
+      <para>Log in to the link above using the credentials provided by
       Enea.</para>
     </listitem>
 
@@ -22,9 +22,8 @@
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para>Inside, the <literal>Files</literal> section on the left will
-      display each official release of Enea NFV Access, with the latest at the
-      top.</para>
+      <para>The <literal>Files</literal> section on the left will display each
+      official release of Enea NFV Access, with the latest at the top.</para>
 
       <para>Each release listing displays the dates for release and updates
       available, along with a <literal>Download</literal> button that allows
@@ -37,22 +36,21 @@
       of the page are clearly labeled region-specific zip files containing the
       binary sources.</para>
 
-      <para>The documentation included is available at the bottom of the page
-      from version 1.1.1.</para>
+      <para>Starting from Enea NFV Access 1.1.1, documentation is also
+      available at the bottom of the page.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para>Back on the main <literal>Access</literal> page, on the right side
-      of the screen is an <literal>Online Documentation</literal> section,
-      listing pdfs for the latest versions of documentation. They can all be
-      accessed for indiviudual downloading without the need to download the
-      binaries first.</para>
-
-      <para>For details about the books delivered and their purpose, please
-      refer to <xref linkend="relinfo-documentation" />.</para>
+      <para>On the right side of the main <literal>Access</literal> page is
+      the <literal>Online Documentation</literal> section, listing pdfs for
+      the latest versions of documentation. They can all be accessed for
+      indiviudual downloading without the need to download the binaries
+      first.</para>
     </listitem>
   </orderedlist>
 
-  <para>For details about the contents of the release package, please refer to
-  <xref linkend="release-content" />.</para>
+  <para>For details about the books delivered and their purpose, refer to
+  <xref linkend="relinfo-documentation" />. For information concerning the
+  contents of the release package, please see <xref
+  linkend="release-content" />.</para>
 </chapter>
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