From 240f4c7b75d836dd6135ff2763cf46ac4a9d8ee9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: mrpa
Date: Thu, 3 Dec 2020 12:11:45 +0100
Subject: Final text edits to the getting started.
Change-Id: I6669f7f381adffb235d77487ade1b8263ac09db4
Signed-off-by: mrpa
---
.../doc/advanced_configurations.xml | 2 +-
.../doc/images/prep_deploy.png | Bin 322979 -> 141376 bytes
.../doc/images/prep_execution.png | Bin 312054 -> 132829 bytes
.../doc/installation_guide.xml | 28 +++++++++++++--------
.../doc/introduction.xml | 4 +--
5 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/advanced_configurations.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/advanced_configurations.xml
index 8925498..c03f657 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/advanced_configurations.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/advanced_configurations.xml
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
CSM support and Dual Boot must be enabled in BIOS (i.e. PXE
booting in legacy mode), while the final Enea NFV Access image will
boot in UEFI mode. Doing a mass deployment using legacy PXE booting
- usually means that SecureBoot is disabled, SecureBoot will need to
+ usually means that Secure Boot is disabled, Secure Boot will need to
be enabled afterwards.
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/images/prep_deploy.png b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/images/prep_deploy.png
index e75275e..67b96a9 100755
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diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/images/prep_execution.png b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/images/prep_execution.png
index 2917cd6..f589495 100755
Binary files a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/images/prep_execution.png and b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/images/prep_execution.png differ
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/installation_guide.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/installation_guide.xml
index 9e0ccb8..acd53b4 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/installation_guide.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/installation_guide.xml
@@ -172,13 +172,13 @@ sudo systemctl mask -now firewalld
Use the following command sequence to enable the required ports
for deployment of the Enea uCPE Manager:
- sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-service=80/tcp
-sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-service=443/tcp
-sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-service=54327/udp
-sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-service=5701-5708/tcp
-sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-service=4334/tcp
-sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-service=2021-2040/tcp
-sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-service=7000-7010/tcp
+ sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-port=80/tcp
+sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-port=443/tcp
+sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-port=54327/udp
+sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-port=5701-5708/tcp
+sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-port=4334/tcp
+sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-port=2021-2040/tcp
+sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-port=7000-7010/tcp
sudo firewall-cmd --reload
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ export CLASSPATH=.:$JAVA_HOME/jre/lib:$JAVA_HOME/lib:$JAVA_HOME/lib/tools.jar
yum remove postgres\*
-rm -f /var/lib/pgsql
+rm -rf /var/lib/pgsql
rm -f /etc/postgres-reg.ini
userdel postgres
@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@ SystemBackup_MMMDD_YYYY_HHMM_SS.zip
Run Time Platform
To install the Enea NFV Access Run Time Platform, create a
- bootable USB stick with the image you intend to install.
+ bootable USB stick with the image you intend to install.
In the example below, step by step instructions are provided for
the CentOS 7 distribution. It's possible with the appropriate tools to
@@ -774,6 +774,12 @@ of=/dev/sdb bs=4M conv=fsync
stage, user should remove the USB stick and LAN cable and shutdown the
uCPE device. It will be started after necessary configurations are done
on the Enea uCPE Manager, as described below.
+
+
+ If the USB stick was booted in UEFI mode, an UEFI boot entry is
+ automatically created and the system will start booting from the
+ hard drive without further user configuration.
+
@@ -879,7 +885,7 @@ of=/dev/sdb bs=4M conv=fsync
establish a management connection, the user will add uCPE device
information in the Enea uCPE Manager. This is accomplished by selecting
Devices -> Manage ->
- Add.
+ Add.
The relevant parameters are:
@@ -943,7 +949,7 @@ of=/dev/sdb bs=4M conv=fsync
misconfiguration), the uCPE device status will be seen as RED
(disconnected) in Enea uCPE Manager. Please check the accuracy of the
information provided when the uCPE device was registered in the Enea
- uCPE Manager.
+ uCPE Manager.
The uCPE device configuration can be amended. In order to do
that, please remove the WAN cable(s), reconnect the laptop to the LAN
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/introduction.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/introduction.xml
index c303902..d403abf 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/introduction.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/introduction.xml
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
- The Enea NFV Access Run-Time Platform, which acts as the host
+ The Enea NFV Access Run Time Platform, which acts as the host
for Virtualized Network Functions (VNFs) and provides management over
NETCONF.
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
Enea NFV Access Run Time Platform
- Enea NFV Access Runtime Platform is a lightweight,
+ Enea NFV Access Run Time Platform is a lightweight,
multi-architecture virtualization platform built on de-facto standards
in an SDN/NFV ecosystem. It is designed for a high networking
performance with minimal hardware footprint, by only providing relevant
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