From 6f6d0a59e3b6b8a75522d2918b98de735718f425 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Date: Wed, 3 Apr 2013 08:51:38 -0700
Subject: ref-manual, dev-manual: Applied review edits (read-only rootfs and
 package repo)

A couple sets of review comments from Paul applied here.

1. Added the "read-only-rootfs" item to the EXTRA_IMAGE_FEATURES
   variable description and a link to the appropriate section
   in the dev-manual.

2. Pulled the how-to-create a package repository section out
   of the section on how to customize an image with the
   IMAGE_FEATURES and EXTRA_IMAGE_FEATURES section and made
   it a stand-alone section in the "Tasks" chapter of the
   dev-manual.

3. Integrated the SSH server example into the main topic
   because we don't want an isolated sub-section within a
   main topic.

4. In the image features section of the ref-manual, I fixed
   the link with the "read-only-rootfs" feature to go to
   the now-isolated section on how to do that instead of
   going to the customizing an image using the IMAGE_FEATURES
   and EXTRA_IMAGE_FEATURES variables section.

(From yocto-docs rev: 9c79b5f40d8dc6b37fbe636a2459f89b70bd8ea8)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/ref-manual/ref-features.xml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation/ref-manual/ref-features.xml')

diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/ref-features.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/ref-features.xml
index 97c645149c..7c43ab392f 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/ref-features.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/ref-features.xml
@@ -184,10 +184,10 @@
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>doc-pkgs:</emphasis> Installs documentation packages for all packages
                     installed in a given image.</para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>nfs-server:</emphasis> Installs an NFS server.</para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para><emphasis>read-only-fsroot:</emphasis> Creates 
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>read-only-fsroot:</emphasis> Creates
                     an image whose root filesystem is read-only.
-                    See the 
-                    "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#usingpoky-extend-customimage-imagefeatures'>Customizing Images Using Custom <filename>IMAGE_FEATURES</filename> and <filename>EXTRA_IMAGE_FEATURES</filename></ulink>"
+                    See the
+                    "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#creating-a-read-only-root-filesystem'>Creating a Read-Only Root Filesystem</ulink>"
                     section in the Yocto Project Development Manual for more
                     information.</para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>splash:</emphasis> Enables showing a splash screen during boot.
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